[Basic Writing] 무적스쿨 Eunice Afternoon _ Clever Cinderella

Clever Cinderella

 

Have you ever heard about a girl named Cinderella who graduated last year? She was bullied by evil stepsisters wherever she went. Her stepsisters treated her like their maid maide. One day, a private high school chairman held a big party to that congratulate for his son's birthday. As soon as she heard this news, Cinderella (she) revealed her ambitious and determined to change her life through this opportunity.

"Don't you need some helping hand (hands)? I think I can help you guys during the party."

Said Cinderella concealing (with veiled) her true intention. Without anyone knowing (Anyone without knowing), Cinderella prepared for her real plan to get them a drink with the sleeping powders in it. (take them sleeping powders.)

"Don't (Do) you feel thirsty? I bring some soft drinks here for you!" said Cinderella.

When the bullies unwittingly fell asleep with the special drinks, without any concern she put on their clothes (changed her clothes into theirs) and entered into the hall. Cinderella began to find her target who was the protagonist of this party. The son of chief who was well-known as the richest student had crush (crushed) on her at first sight (time). While they enjoyed the (spent) fantastic night, the sleeping bullies broke into the party messing up the place(with scold). Embarrassed, the beautiful yet (but) dangerous woman urgently ran run away. At that time, she was so appalled(panic), dropping her cell-phone. The very next day, Cinderella called to her phone and the guy answered phone. From that day on, they have has been in a relationship.

1. 목적어 빼먹지 말 것!

2. 미스스펠링에 주의할 것

3. 동사+전치사 활용 주의 (전치사가 필요없는 동사에 주의할 것!)

4. 보다 정확한 묘사를 할 수 있도록 (알고 있다고 전제하지 말 것, 형용사 사용하여 명사 꾸미기, 적절한 부사 사용

5. 명확한 표현법 알고 사용하기.

6. 관사, 관사, 그리고 관사 빼먹지 말기 ㅠ_ ㅠ

7. 시제 주의 할 것

 

 

 

Clever Cinderella

 

  Have you ever heard about a girl named Cinderella who graduated last year? She was bullied by evil stepsisters wherever she went. Her stepsisters treated her like their maid. One day, a private high school chairman held a big party to congratulate his son's birthday. As soon as she heard this news, Cinderella revealed her ambitious and determined to change her life through this opportunity.

  "Don't you need some helping hand? I think I can help you guys during the party."

  Said Cinderella concealing her true intention. Without anyone knowing, Cinderella prepared for her real plan to get them a drink with the sleeping powders in it.

  "Don't you feel thirsty? I bring some soft drinks here for you!" said Cinderella.

  When the bullies unwittingly fell asleep with the special drinks, she put on their clothes and entered the hall. Cinderella began to find her target the protagonist of this party. The son of chief who was well-known as the richest student had crush on her at first sight. While they enjoyed the fantastic night, the sleeping bullies broke into the party messing up the place. Embarrassed, the beautiful yet dangerous woman urgently ran away. At that time, she was so appalled, dropping her cell-phone. The very next day, Cinderella called to her phone and the guy answered phone. From that day on, they have been in a relationship.